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IMDB rating: 6.60 Plot: The world is full of zombies and the survivors have barricaded themselves inside a walled city to keep out the living dead. As the wealthy hide out in skyscrapers and chaos rules the streets, the rest of the survivors must find a way to stop the evolving zombies from breaking into the city. |
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(Ailo)
Being the Unseelie Queen is so puzzling. All I do is sit around and behead those who disobey my orders. I sit around and listen to my knight, Faven, jabber on about stuff I really don’t care about. I do not listen. Most of the stuff he talks about doesn’t even matter to me.
"Ailo," he says. "Ailo listen to me!" He yells, his high voice that pierces my ears. I stare at him with a stern looks on my face.
"Faven," I say. "You are not to call me Ailo. I am your Dark Lady. Do you take me as an average person?" I ask. He looks at me. No answer. "So what do you ask of me?" I ask.
" Nothing of you, My Lady," he says. " But a…human killed your daughter." He finishes. I stare back with a look of terror on my face.
"Which one?" I ask. Even though I am the Dark Queen, I still love my daughters. He looks at me. Tears run down my face. Are they all dead?
"Tania," he says. "Your youngest, Tania. I look in horror, still in shock.
"Oberon! Haven!" I yell. They come to me. My knights are the best in the land, and they will find the human who killed my Tania, and this time I will have a reason to behead somebody.
(Haven- Samhain)
Samhain is by far the best time of year for blood. I stare at Oberon who is looking off at some distant little girl.
"This is hard," he says. It is hard to find someone suspicious looking when everyone is dressed up in some ridiculous costume. If I do not find the culprit, Ailo will surely have me beheaded. I get a chill up my spine.
Children are running every which way with their bags of candy. I hate to see them mocking us so.
"Oberon?" I ask. "Doesn’t it seem odd that the human killed one of the fae. You’d think that even Tania would have been able to glamour herself. I didn’t even think they saw us," I say.
"Correct," replies Oberon. "That’s what puzzles me so. Plus, why would a human want to kill Tania?" he asks. I shrug. Strands of black hair fall in my face. Oberon looks like he just got hit in the stomach. I grab his hand.
"I hate to say this," I say. " We are going to disguise ourselves as Trick or Treaters."
(Oberon)
Haven and I glamour ourselves. She is a nine year-old girl dressed as a Gothic doll. I am dressed as a faery boy. How ironic. Haven is so cruel. All she thinks about is blood. We look around all the houses, and there is still no sign of a murderous one around.
Haven stares at something.
"Look," she says, pointing at a bloody disk. "The Divining Disk of Pergamon. Didn’t Tania have a copy of this?" she finishes. It is very bloody. Haven picks it up and licks the blood off of it.
"It is definately royal blood." she says.
(Rena-Human)
I drag the body down the river. That should teach them not to mess with me. I carry my cleaver in my hand too, blood dripping from it. I don’t think she’s completely dead yet.
She opens her eyes and looks at me.
"May all the Unseelie Fae curse you," she says. I laugh. She jabbers about her mother who is apparently the Queen of the Faeries. Nonsense. Faeries don’t exist.
I clutch my cleaver. It is so fitting for me. Two children walk up to me. One is dressed as a doll. The other, a boy, is ironically, a faery. They look at me, and then the girl.
"She was crazy," I say. "Suffering. She needed to go." I say. They look at me.
"How dare you murder our queen’s daughter," they say. I laugh very hard. They must be disturbed too. our eyes meet.
"If it matters that much, children, then why don’t you fight me?" I ask. They look at eachother and nod at me.
"Very well then," says the girl. Her voice is very deep for a young child. At that thought, she grows tall and winged, and her partner grows too. Their ears are pointed.
I still have my cleaver. I raise it to them, but they dodge it. The girl pulls a sword out. I look at it. Before I know it, the sword is stuck in my chest. The man removes it and leaves me to die, taking the girl.
(Haven-November First)
Ailo looks at me and smiles. She takes Tania out of Oberon’s arms. She bows in thanks to me. I nod in welcome.
"Keep the disk," says Ailo. I nod. Speaking is overrated. Oberon smiles at me and we walk away to the dais. We look at eachother and give our honored speech. This is the first time I had ever seen Oberon smile, and I like it.
I feel fullfilled, like my purpose is completed. I wonder what happened to Rena. I’m sure she’s dead. I know one thing for sure. I’m proud of myself for saving Tania. I reward myself with a fresh glass of wine and go to sleep at last.
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Ron | Nov 12, 2009
Cool story, but the only issue I had is that "Trick or Treaters" sounded modern.
Collin | Nov 12, 2009
I didn’t even think they saw us," I say. (put quotation at front of sentence)
our eyes meet. (captialize Our.)
eachother (it should be each other).
Nice story, good job.
IluvBuddy | Nov 12, 2009
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